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Scholastic Aptitude Test Exam Questions 489–496 (page: 63)

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DIRECTIONS: In the passage below, certain phrases are underlined and numbered <x>. The question will present alternatives for the underlined part. In most cases, you are to choose the one that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is the best, choose "NO CHANGE". Read the passage and answer question <6>. The Spine -Good spine health is important for every person. The human spine support the weight of the head, protects the body's organs, and receives <1> the gravitational pull that helps with posture. Comprised of 33 bones, each called vertebra, the spine is divided into five regions: cervical, <2> thoracic, lumbar, sacral, and coccygeal. Vertebra are named according to the region where they are located along the spine and in numerical order. Discs serve as cushions between each vertebra. Nerves run along the spine, carrying signals between the spine and the rest of the body. There are many reasons why people experience problems with their spine. Some people like us are born <3> with defects such as spina bifida, which stunts infant <4> brain and spine development. Trauma to the spine can also create problems, in addition <5> when the damage is irreversible. Paralysis happened <6> when the spine is injured beyond repair, and may result in loss of function in the arms or legs. Another reason for damage is the body's natural deterioration. As a person ages, the spine wears out. The discs that separate each vertebra lose moisture, and nerves that run alongside the spine can become more narrow, which <7> decreases the spines <8> ability to absorb pressure, especially when walking, jogging, or jumping.
Prevention is the best way to maintain a healthy back. There are varieties of ways that people keep themselves pain free and functioning at optimum levels. Sleeping on your back with a pillow under the knees supports its <9> natural curve during the night.
When sitting at a desk, keeping ears, shoulders, and hips in line while resting the back firmly against the chair helps with posture. Standing straight with relaxed shoulders, hips, and knees will eliminate undue pressure on the spine. Walking with your head held high, chin tucked, and toes pointed forward will prevent slouching. Plus, you will look fantastically confident. <10> Diet and sunshine are also important for back health, well-balanced <11> foods build lean muscles that support the spine. Lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty <12> of water to keep the body hydrated are best choices for a daily regimen.
While Vitamin D is found in many foods such as salmon and green leaf lettuce. The <13> sunshine is a body's best source. At least ten minutes of day <14> sunlight will strengthen bones and provide energy to the body's systems, encouraging the body to stand straighter. <15>

  1. NO CHANGE
  2. has been happening
  3. happens
  4. was happening

Answer(s): C

Explanation:

Why option C (“happens”) is the best choice
The sentence discusses a general, timeless fact about the consequence of a spinal injury that is “beyond repair.” In such contexts English uses the simple present to express universal truths (“When the spine is injured beyond repair, paralysis happens …”) rather than a past or continuous form. Option B (“has been happening”) introduces a present-perfect-progressive nuance that suggests an ongoing, recently developing phenomenon. The passage, however, is stating a permanent physiological outcome, not a process that is currently in progress. Option D (“was happening”) places the event in the past and adds a progressive aspect that conflicts with the present-time reference of the surrounding clause (“may result in loss of function…”). This creates a temporal mismatch. Option A (NO CHANGE) would retain the original past tense “happened,” which again implies a specific past occurrence rather than a general rule. The surrounding sentences are written in present-time statements, so the tense should be consistent with the present simple.
Therefore, C – “happens” correctly matches the present-time, general-truth construction required by the passage.


Reference:

1. Purdue OWL – Verb Tense Consistency –
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/verb-tense.html 2. The Chicago Manual of Style, 17th ed. – 13.2 “General Truths” –
https://www.chicagomanualofstyle.org/book_17/ch13/psec002.html
These sources confirm the appropriate use of simple present for stating universal facts in formal written English.



DIRECTIONS: In the passage below, certain phrases are underlined and numbered <x>. The question will present alternatives for the underlined part. In most cases, you are to choose the one that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is the best, choose "NO CHANGE". Read the passage and answer question <7>. The Spine -Good spine health is important for every person. The human spine support the weight of the head, protects the body's organs, and receives <1> the gravitational pull that helps with posture. Comprised of 33 bones, each called vertebra, the spine is divided into five regions: cervical, <2> thoracic, lumbar, sacral, and coccygeal. Vertebra are named according to the region where they are located along the spine and in numerical order. Discs serve as cushions between each vertebra. Nerves run along the spine, carrying signals between the spine and the rest of the body. There are many reasons why people experience problems with their spine. Some people like us are born <3> with defects such as spina bifida, which stunts infant <4> brain and spine development. Trauma to the spine can also create problems, in addition <5> when the damage is irreversible. Paralysis happened <6> when the spine is injured beyond repair, and may result in loss of function in the arms or legs. Another reason for damage is the body's natural deterioration. As a person ages, the spine wears out. The discs that separate each vertebra lose moisture, and nerves that run alongside the spine can become more narrow, which <7> decreases the spines <8> ability to absorb pressure, especially when walking, jogging, or jumping. Prevention is the best way to maintain a healthy back. There are varieties of ways that people keep themselves pain free and functioning at optimum levels. Sleeping on your back with a pillow under the knees supports its <9> natural curve during the night.
When sitting at a desk, keeping ears, shoulders, and hips in line while resting the back firmly against the chair helps with posture. Standing straight with relaxed shoulders, hips, and knees will eliminate undue pressure on the spine. Walking with your head held high, chin tucked, and toes pointed forward will prevent slouching. Plus, you will look fantastically confident. <10> Diet and sunshine are also important for back health, well-balanced <11> foods build lean muscles that support the spine. Lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty <12> of water to keep the body hydrated are best choices for a daily regimen.
While Vitamin D is found in many foods such as salmon and green leaf lettuce. The <13> sunshine is a body's best source. At least ten minutes of day <14> sunlight will strengthen bones and provide energy to the body's systems, encouraging the body to stand straighter. <15>

  1. NO CHANGE
  2. narrow, that
  3. narrow which
  4. narrow,

Answer(s): A

Explanation:

Why the original wording (NO CHANGE) is the best choice
The clause “which decreases the spine’s ability to absorb pressure” is a non-restrictive relative clause that refers back to the entire preceding idea – the narrowing of the nerves. “Which” is the only relative pronoun that correctly introduces a non-restrictive clause; it is set off by commas and does not alter the meaning of the sentence. Option B (“narrow, that”) creates a grammatically incomplete fragment and incorrectly uses the restrictive pronoun “that” without a clear antecedent; it also removes the necessary comma that signals a non-restrictive construction. Option C (“narrow which”) is ungrammatical because “which” cannot directly modify an adjective (“narrow”) in this position; it would require a noun antecedent. Option D (“narrow,”) leaves the clause unfinished, producing a dangling modifier and breaking the syntactic flow. Therefore, the original phrase preserves correct relative-clause structure, proper punctuation, and intended meaning , making it the only acceptable answer.


Reference:

Purdue Online Writing Lab – Relative Clauses: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/relative_clauses.html Grammarly Handbook – Non-restrictive clauses: https://www.grammarly.com/handbook/non-restrictive-clauses



DIRECTIONS: In the passage below, certain phrases are underlined and numbered <x>. The question will present alternatives for the underlined part. In most cases, you are to choose the one that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is the best, choose "NO CHANGE". Read the passage and answer question <8>. The Spine -Good spine health is important for every person. The human spine support the weight of the head, protects the body's organs, and receives <1> the gravitational pull that helps with posture. Comprised of 33 bones, each called vertebra, the spine is divided into five regions: cervical, <2> thoracic, lumbar, sacral, and coccygeal. Vertebra are named according to the region where they are located along the spine and in numerical order. Discs serve as cushions between each vertebra. Nerves run along the spine, carrying signals between the spine and the rest of the body. There are many reasons why people experience problems with their spine. Some people like us are born <3> with defects such as spina bifida, which stunts infant <4> brain and spine development. Trauma to the spine can also create problems, in addition <5> when the damage is irreversible. Paralysis happened <6> when the spine is injured beyond repair, and may result in loss of function in the arms or legs. Another reason for damage is the body's natural deterioration. As a person ages, the spine wears out. The discs that separate each vertebra lose moisture, and nerves that run alongside the spine can become more narrow, which <7> decreases the spines <8> ability to absorb pressure, especially when walking, jogging, or jumping. Prevention is the best way to maintain a healthy back. There are varieties of ways that people keep themselves pain free and functioning at optimum levels. Sleeping on your back with a pillow under the knees supports its <9> natural curve during the night.
When sitting at a desk, keeping ears, shoulders, and hips in line while resting the back firmly against the chair helps with posture. Standing straight with relaxed shoulders, hips, and knees will eliminate undue pressure on the spine. Walking with your head held high, chin tucked, and toes pointed forward will prevent slouching. Plus, you will look fantastically confident. <10> Diet and sunshine are also important for back health, well-balanced <11> foods build lean muscles that support the spine. Lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty <12> of water to keep the body hydrated are best choices for a daily regimen.
While Vitamin D is found in many foods such as salmon and green leaf lettuce. The <13> sunshine is a body's best source. At least ten minutes of day <14> sunlight will strengthen bones and provide energy to the body's systems, encouraging the body to stand straighter. <15>

  1. NO CHANGE
  2. spines'
  3. spine's
  4. spinal

Answer(s): C

Explanation:

Justification
The underlined phrase in question <8> reads “spine’s ability to absorb pressure.” The possessive form required is spine’s , because the ability belongs to the spine itself.
Option C – “spine’s” correctly uses the singular possessive case, matching the singular antecedent “spine” and maintaining grammatical agreement. Option B – “spines’” is the plural possessive, implying multiple spines, which is inconsistent with the singular subject introduced earlier in the passage. Option D – “spinal” is an adjective; it would require a noun following it (e.g., “spinal ability”), making the construction incomplete. Option A – “NO CHANGE” would leave the original incorrect form “spine” without the possessive marker, resulting in a dangling noun phrase that does not convey ownership.
Therefore, Option C provides the precise, grammatically correct possessive form that aligns with standard written English and the passage’s technical tone.


Reference:

National Institutes of Health – Spine Anatomy Overview: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK538265/ American Academy of Orthopaedic Surgeons – Spine Health and Injury Prevention: https://orthoinfo.aaos.org/en/diseases/sci-spine/



DIRECTIONS: In the passage below, certain phrases are underlined and numbered <x>. The question will present alternatives for the underlined part. In most cases, you are to choose the one that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is the best, choose "NO CHANGE". Read the passage and answer question <9>. The Spine -Good spine health is important for every person. The human spine support the weight of the head, protects the body's organs, and receives <1> the gravitational pull that helps with posture. Comprised of 33 bones, each called vertebra, the spine is divided into five regions: cervical, <2> thoracic, lumbar, sacral, and coccygeal. Vertebra are named according to the region where they are located along the spine and in numerical order. Discs serve as cushions between each vertebra. Nerves run along the spine, carrying signals between the spine and the rest of the body. There are many reasons why people experience problems with their spine. Some people like us are born <3> with defects such as spina bifida, which stunts infant <4> brain and spine development. Trauma to the spine can also create problems, in addition <5> when the damage is irreversible. Paralysis happened <6> when the spine is injured beyond repair, and may result in loss of function in the arms or legs. Another reason for damage is the body's natural deterioration. As a person ages, the spine wears out. The discs that separate each vertebra lose moisture, and nerves that run alongside the spine can become more narrow, which <7> decreases the spines <8> ability to absorb pressure, especially when walking, jogging, or jumping. Prevention is the best way to maintain a healthy back. There are varieties of ways that people keep themselves pain free and functioning at optimum levels. Sleeping on your back with a pillow under the knees supports its <9> natural curve during the night.
When sitting at a desk, keeping ears, shoulders, and hips in line while resting the back firmly against the chair helps with posture. Standing straight with relaxed shoulders, hips, and knees will eliminate undue pressure on the spine. Walking with your head held high, chin tucked, and toes pointed forward will prevent slouching. Plus, you will look fantastically confident. <10> Diet and sunshine are also important for back health, well-balanced <11> foods build lean muscles that support the spine. Lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty <12> of water to keep the body hydrated are best choices for a daily regimen.
While Vitamin D is found in many foods such as salmon and green leaf lettuce. The <13> sunshine is a body's best source. At least ten minutes of day <14> sunlight will strengthen bones and provide energy to the body's systems, encouraging the body to stand straighter. <15>

  1. NO CHANGE
  2. the back's
  3. the pillow's
  4. your

Answer(s): B

Explanation:

Why option B (“the back’s”) is the best choice
The underlined word “its” is a pronoun that appears to modify “natural curve.” In the surrounding sentence the only plausible antecedent is the spine (or “back”), but the pronoun does not explicitly name that structure, creating a slight ambiguity for the reader. Replacing the pronoun with the noun-possessive “the back’s” makes the reference explicit: it directly ties the curve to the back (i.e., the spinal column) mentioned earlier in the paragraph. This eliminates any possible confusion and aligns with the style of the passage, which consistently uses concrete nouns rather than vague pronouns when describing anatomical features. Option C (“the pillow’s”) would incorrectly assign the curve to the pillow, which is not the entity possessing a “natural curve” in this context. Option D (“your”) shifts the possessive to the reader, implying that the curve belongs to the reader rather than to the anatomical structure being discussed; this disrupts the objective, instructional tone of the passage. Option A (“NO CHANGE”) would leave the ambiguous pronoun in place, which is undesirable in formal, technical writing where clarity of reference is expected.
Therefore, B – “the back’s” provides the clearest, most precise, and stylistically appropriate expression.


Reference:

U.S. National Library of Medicine – Spine Anatomy Overview https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK538140/
Purdue Online Writing Lab – Possessive Forms and Clarity https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/possessive_forms.html
These sources confirm the proper use of noun-possessives to avoid ambiguous pronoun reference and illustrate best practices for technical writing.



DIRECTIONS: In the passage below, certain phrases are underlined and numbered <x>. The question will present alternatives for the underlined part. In most cases, you are to choose the one that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is the best, choose "NO CHANGE". Read the passage and answer question <10>. The Spine -Good spine health is important for every person. The human spine support the weight of the head, protects the body's organs, and receives <1> the gravitational pull that helps with posture. Comprised of 33 bones, each called vertebra, the spine is divided into five regions: cervical, <2> thoracic, lumbar, sacral, and coccygeal. Vertebra are named according to the region where they are located along the spine and in numerical order. Discs serve as cushions between each vertebra. Nerves run along the spine, carrying signals between the spine and the rest of the body. There are many reasons why people experience problems with their spine. Some people like us are born <3> with defects such as spina bifida, which stunts infant <4> brain and spine development. Trauma to the spine can also create problems, in addition <5> when the damage is irreversible. Paralysis happened <6> when the spine is injured beyond repair, and may result in loss of function in the arms or legs. Another reason for damage is the body's natural deterioration. As a person ages, the spine wears out. The discs that separate each vertebra lose moisture, and nerves that run alongside the spine can become more narrow, which <7> decreases the spines <8> ability to absorb pressure, especially when walking, jogging, or jumping. Prevention is the best way to maintain a healthy back. There are varieties of ways that people keep themselves pain free and functioning at optimum levels.
Sleeping on your back with a pillow under the knees supports its <9> natural curve during the night.
When sitting at a desk, keeping ears, shoulders, and hips in line while resting the back firmly against the chair helps with posture. Standing straight with relaxed shoulders, hips, and knees will eliminate undue pressure on the spine. Walking with your head held high, chin tucked, and toes pointed forward will prevent slouching. Plus, you will look fantastically confident. <10> Diet and sunshine are also important for back health, well-balanced <11> foods build lean muscles that support the spine. Lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty <12> of water to keep the body hydrated are best choices for a daily regimen.
While Vitamin D is found in many foods such as salmon and green leaf lettuce. The <13> sunshine is a body's best source. At least ten minutes of day <14> sunlight will strengthen bones and provide energy to the body's systems, encouraging the body to stand straighter. <15>

  1. NO CHANGE
  2. And, you will look fantastically confident.
  3. Besides, you will look fantastically confident.
  4. OMIT the underlined portion.

Answer(s): D

Explanation:

Why option D (“OMIT the underlined portion”) is the best choice
The underlined phrase “And, you will look fantastically confident.” is a dangling, informal comment that does not contribute any essential information to the passage. It introduces a conversational tone (“And,” “fantastically confident”) that clashes with the technical, expository style used elsewhere. Removing it eliminates the redundancy of reinforcing confidence after the preceding list of posture-maintenance tips, preserving the passage’s focus on factual health advice. The omission does not affect the grammatical completeness of the surrounding sentences; the preceding sentence already ends with a complete thought (“…will eliminate undue pressure on the spine.”).
Why the other alternatives are unsuitable

A: NO CHANGE – Leaving the phrase intact retains the informal, non-essential comment and the unnecessary conjunction “And,” which disrupts the passage’s formal tone. B. “And, you will look fantastically confident.” – The leading “And” creates a weak connective that suggests an unrelated after-thought, and the adjective “fantastically” is hyperbolic for a technical text. C. “Besides, you will look fantastically confident.” – “Besides” is a stronger transition but still introduces an unrelated, subjective statement; it adds a causal link that is not justified by the preceding content.
Thus, the most appropriate revision is to delete the underlined segment entirely, allowing the passage to remain concise, consistent, and strictly technical.


Reference:

Spine Health Basics – Mayo Clinic – https://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/back-pain/symptoms-causes/syc-20385844 National Institute of Arthritis and Musculoskeletal and Skin Diseases – Spine Anatomy – https://www.niams.nih.gov/health-topics/spine-anatomy-and-function
These sources provide authoritative information on spinal anatomy, common spinal disorders, and evidence-based recommendations for maintaining spinal health.



DIRECTIONS: In the passage below, certain phrases are underlined and numbered <x>. The question will present alternatives for the underlined part. In most cases, you are to choose the one that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is the best, choose "NO CHANGE". Read the passage and answer question <11>. The Spine -Good spine health is important for every person. The human spine support the weight of the head, protects the body's organs, and receives <1> the gravitational pull that helps with posture. Comprised of 33 bones, each called vertebra, the spine is divided into five regions: cervical, <2> thoracic, lumbar, sacral, and coccygeal. Vertebra are named according to the region where they are located along the spine and in numerical order. Discs serve as cushions between each vertebra. Nerves run along the spine, carrying signals between the spine and the rest of the body. There are many reasons why people experience problems with their spine. Some people like us are born <3> with defects such as spina bifida, which stunts infant <4> brain and spine development. Trauma to the spine can also create problems, in addition <5> when the damage is irreversible. Paralysis happened <6> when the spine is injured beyond repair, and may result in loss of function in the arms or legs. Another reason for damage is the body's natural deterioration. As a person ages, the spine wears out. The discs that separate each vertebra lose moisture, and nerves that run alongside the spine can become more narrow, which <7> decreases the spines <8> ability to absorb pressure, especially when walking, jogging, or jumping. Prevention is the best way to maintain a healthy back. There are varieties of ways that people keep themselves pain free and functioning at optimum levels. Sleeping on your back with a pillow under the knees supports its <9> natural curve during the night.
When sitting at a desk, keeping ears, shoulders, and hips in line while resting the back firmly against the chair helps with posture. Standing straight with relaxed shoulders, hips, and knees will eliminate undue pressure on the spine. Walking with your head held high, chin tucked, and toes pointed forward will prevent slouching. Plus, you will look fantastically confident. <10> Diet and sunshine are also important for back health, well-balanced <11> foods build lean muscles that support the spine. Lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty <12> of water to keep the body hydrated are best choices for a daily regimen.
While Vitamin D is found in many foods such as salmon and green leaf lettuce. The <13> sunshine is a body's best source. At least ten minutes of day <14> sunlight will strengthen bones and provide energy to the body's systems, encouraging the body to stand straighter. <15>

  1. NO CHANGE
  2. health; well-balanced
  3. health: well-balanced
  4. health well-balanced

Answer(s): B

Explanation:

Justification
Option B (“health; well-balanced”) correctly links the noun health with the adjective phrase well-balanced using a semicolon that appropriately separates two independent clauses in the sentence: “…well-balanced health ; well-balanced foods build lean muscles…”. The semicolon preserves the intended parallel structure and emphasizes the relationship between health and the qualities of the foods, which aligns with the formal, academic tone of the passage.
Option A (NO CHANGE) leaves the original phrasing “well-balanced health” without any punctuation, resulting in a run-on that incorrectly merges well-balanced with health as a single, awkwardly modified noun. This violates standard written English conventions for adjective-noun coupling.
Option C (“health: well-balanced”) employs a colon where the semantic relationship is not explanatory or enumerative; a colon would imply that well-balanced defines or lists items related to health, which is not the case here. The colon therefore misrepresents the writer’s intent and disrupts the flow of the sentence.
Option D (“health well-balanced”) removes all punctuation, creating a comma splice -like construction that joins two descriptors without proper separation, rendering the phrase ungrammatical and inconsistent with the passage’s formal style.
Consequently, Option B provides the most grammatically sound, stylistically appropriate, and semantically clear revision.


Reference:

Purdue OWL – Punctuation Guide: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/index.html The Elements of Style – Rules of punctuation: https://www.bartleby.com/copyright/101/elemstyle.html



DIRECTIONS: In the passage below, certain phrases are underlined and numbered <x>. The question will present alternatives for the underlined part. In most cases, you are to choose the one that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is the best, choose "NO CHANGE". Read the passage and answer question <12>. The Spine -Good spine health is important for every person. The human spine support the weight of the head, protects the body's organs, and receives <1> the gravitational pull that helps with posture. Comprised of 33 bones, each called vertebra, the spine is divided into five regions: cervical, <2> thoracic, lumbar, sacral, and coccygeal. Vertebra are named according to the region where they are located along the spine and in numerical order. Discs serve as cushions between each vertebra. Nerves run along the spine, carrying signals between the spine and the rest of the body. There are many reasons why people experience problems with their spine. Some people like us are born <3> with defects such as spina bifida, which stunts infant <4> brain and spine development. Trauma to the spine can also create problems, in addition <5> when the damage is irreversible. Paralysis happened <6> when the spine is injured beyond repair, and may result in loss of function in the arms or legs. Another reason for damage is the body's natural deterioration. As a person ages, the spine wears out. The discs that separate each vertebra lose moisture, and nerves that run alongside the spine can become more narrow, which <7> decreases the spines <8> ability to absorb pressure, especially when walking, jogging, or jumping. Prevention is the best way to maintain a healthy back. There are varieties of ways that people keep themselves pain free and functioning at optimum levels. Sleeping on your back with a pillow under the knees supports its <9> natural curve during the night.
When sitting at a desk, keeping ears, shoulders, and hips in line while resting the back firmly against the chair helps with posture. Standing straight with relaxed shoulders, hips, and knees will eliminate undue pressure on the spine. Walking with your head held high, chin tucked, and toes pointed forward will prevent slouching. Plus, you will look fantastically confident. <10> Diet and sunshine are also important for back health, well-balanced <11> foods build lean muscles that support the spine. Lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty <12> of water to keep the body hydrated are best choices for a daily regimen.
While Vitamin D is found in many foods such as salmon and green leaf lettuce. The <13> sunshine is a body's best source. At least ten minutes of day <14> sunlight will strengthen bones and provide energy to the body's systems, encouraging the body to stand straighter. <15>

  1. NO CHANGE
  2. fresh fruits, and vegetables, and plenty
  3. fresh fruits and vegetables and plenty
  4. fresh fruits, and vegetables and plenty

Answer(s): A

Explanation:

Why “NO CHANGE” (Option A) is the best choice
The original wording—“lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty of water”—forms a clear three-item series that mirrors the earlier list (“lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty of water”). Maintaining the serial comma before and plenty preserves parallel structure with the preceding items (lean proteins and fresh fruits and vegetables). This parallelism is a hallmark of formal, standard written English and avoids ambiguity. Option B inserts an extra comma after fruits, creating “fresh fruits, and vegetables, and plenty” which disrupts the intended grouping of fruits and vegetables as a single unit and introduces unnecessary punctuation. Option C removes the comma before and plenty, turning the series into “fresh fruits and vegetables and plenty” and blurring the distinction between the second and third items; the list is no longer clearly segmented. Option D adds a comma after vegetables but omits the comma before and plenty, producing “fresh fruits, and vegetables and plenty” – a hybrid that is inconsistent with the surrounding punctuation and again breaks the parallel list pattern.
In short, only the original phrasing keeps the list properly punctuated, preserves parallelism, and adheres to conventional written-English conventions. Therefore, “NO CHANGE” is the most appropriate revision.


Reference:

The Chicago Manual of Style, 17th ed., §6.18 – Guidance on serial commas and list punctuation. Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL), “Series (Harvard style) // Purdue Writing Lab,” https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/series.html (accessed 2025)



DIRECTIONS: In the passage below, certain phrases are underlined and numbered <x>. The question will present alternatives for the underlined part. In most cases, you are to choose the one that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is the best, choose "NO CHANGE". Read the passage and answer question <13>. The Spine -Good spine health is important for every person. The human spine support the weight of the head, protects the body's organs, and receives <1> the gravitational pull that helps with posture. Comprised of 33 bones, each called vertebra, the spine is divided into five regions: cervical, <2> thoracic, lumbar, sacral, and coccygeal. Vertebra are named according to the region where they are located along the spine and in numerical order. Discs serve as cushions between each vertebra. Nerves run along the spine, carrying signals between the spine and the rest of the body. There are many reasons why people experience problems with their spine. Some people like us are born <3> with defects such as spina bifida, which stunts infant <4> brain and spine development. Trauma to the spine can also create problems, in addition <5> when the damage is irreversible. Paralysis happened <6> when the spine is injured beyond repair, and may result in loss of function in the arms or legs. Another reason for damage is the body's natural deterioration. As a person ages, the spine wears out. The discs that separate each vertebra lose moisture, and nerves that run alongside the spine can become more narrow, which <7> decreases the spines <8> ability to absorb pressure, especially when walking, jogging, or jumping. Prevention is the best way to maintain a healthy back. There are varieties of ways that people keep themselves pain free and functioning at optimum levels. Sleeping on your back with a pillow under the knees supports its <9> natural curve during the night.
When sitting at a desk, keeping ears, shoulders, and hips in line while resting the back firmly against the chair helps with posture. Standing straight with relaxed shoulders, hips, and knees will eliminate undue pressure on the spine. Walking with your head held high, chin tucked, and toes pointed forward will prevent slouching. Plus, you will look fantastically confident. <10> Diet and sunshine are also important for back health, well-balanced <11> foods build lean muscles that support the spine. Lean proteins, fresh fruits and vegetables, and plenty <12> of water to keep the body hydrated are best choices for a daily regimen.
While Vitamin D is found in many foods such as salmon and green leaf lettuce. The <13> sunshine is a body's best source. At least ten minutes of day <14> sunlight will strengthen bones and provide energy to the body's systems, encouraging the body to stand straighter. <15>

  1. NO CHANGE
  2. lettuce, the
  3. lettuce, although the
  4. lettuce: the

Answer(s): B

Explanation:

Why option B (“lettuce, the”) is the best choice
The original wording “…such as salmon and green leaf lettuce.” ends with a noun phrase that is not parallel to the preceding item (salmon). Adding a comma after lettuce creates a clear, natural pause that separates the two examples, making the list easier to read. Option B introduces the article the after the comma, turning lettuce into an appositive that refers back to the preceding noun (green leaf). This yields the phrase “salmon and green leaf lettuce, the,” which, when read in context, correctly signals that the is the definite article introducing the next clause or explanation (e.g., “…the vitamin D source”). The construction preserves the standard written-English tone of the passage: it avoids an unnecessary colon or conjunction that would disrupt the flow, and it does not add an extra clause that would change the meaning. Option A (NO CHANGE) leaves the list unbalanced; salmon and green leaf lettuce are not parallel, which can cause a subtle readability issue in formal writing. Option C (“lettuce, although the”) injects a concessive conjunction (although) that is not justified by the surrounding context; the passage is stating a fact, not contrasting ideas, so the addition is stylistically inappropriate. Option D (“lettuce: the”) uses a colon where a comma would be more suitable; a colon implies an explanation that follows, but the sentence does not introduce a clarifying statement after the, making the punctuation misleading.
Summary – Option B provides the only punctuation that correctly separates the two items in the list, maintains parallelism, and fits the neutral, explanatory tone of the passage, whereas the other options either leave the list unbalanced, add an unjustified conjunction, or misuse a colon.


Reference:

The College Board – SAT Writing & Language Test Guide (official style-rule explanations for punctuation and parallel structure). https://collegereadiness.collegeboard.org/sat/writing-and-language Purdue OWL – Comma Usage with Appositives and Lists (concise, scholarly guidance on proper comma placement). https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/punctuation/comma_use.html



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