The campaign is focusing on awareness and prevention as many as early detection and treatment.
Answer(s): B
This sentence has an error in using an adjective (many) that is used for countable nouns where an adjective (much) that can be used for uncountable nouns is needed. Option B has an appropriate adjective (awareness and prevention as much as early detection) that is used for uncountable nouns while other options suggest inappropriate adjectives (many/ more/most) and irregular form of inappropriate adjectives; hence, option B is the correct answer.
In a highly competitive business environment of today companies spend large amounts of money on marketing to increase their customer base and sadly they do not make efforts to increase employee happiness or satisfaction.
Answer(s): C
This sentence has an error by using an inappropriate conjunction in the place of connecting two contrast ideas. Option A uses (and) a conjunction that is used to connect two similar sentences. Option B uses a conjunction (for) that is used when referring the reason for an incident or any reason. Option D has no conjunction. Option E uses (that) a conjunction that is common but it is inappropriate here. Option C uses a conjunction (but) that is used to connect two contrast ideas; hence option C is the correct answer
Companies often overlook the fact that their success lay in the happiness of their employees.
Answer(s): D
This sentence has an error in the subject-verb agreement. In this sentence the (success) subject is an abstract noun which needs a singular verb, and since the preceding verb is in the present tense the verb that follows must also be in the same tense as it is in the option D (that their success lies in the happiness). The other options use unsuitable verb forms (lay/ laid/will lay/ lying); hence option D is the correct answer.
Many organizations never attempt to find out their employers enjoy and derive satisfaction from their work.
Answer(s): A
This sentence has no error but the options show a series of errors in the use of adjectives. The noun (organizations) is a countable noun so an adjective (many) that is used for countable nouns must be used as it is in the option A (Many organizations), whereas others are all wrong by suggesting inappropriate adjectives (much/more/most). Option D uses a irrelevant preposition before the noun (many of organization) that makes it wrong. Option A is the correct answer.
A positive environment leads to great employee satisfaction whereas negative one mars employee performance.
This sentence has an error in the use of adjective form. When referring to a quality of something the comparative form of the adjective is used as it is (greater) in the option B. other options use positive form (great) or superlative (greatest), or some other forms of adjective 'great', which is inappropriate. Option D uses a different noun (grate) that is inappropriate; hence, option B is the correct answer.
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