QUESTION: 16

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Sentence 9:
In spite of the initiatives of these organizations, there is still groups who are not willing to do their part.

Which correction should be made to sentence 9?

change these to those
change organizations, there to organizations there
replace there with they’re
change is to are
replace who with to whom

Answer(s): D

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QUESTION: 17

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Sentence In a study of traffic flow, seventy percent of those questioned claimed that the adjacent lane of traffic was moving faster when, in fact, videocameras revealed that traffic in that lane was moving more slowly.

Which correction should be made to sentence 4?

move sentence 4 to the beginning of the document
move sentence 4 to the end of paragraph C
move sentence 4 to follow sentence 12
move sentence 4 to the beginning of paragraph E
no correction is necessary

Answer(s): E

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QUESTION: 18

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Making a Budget

(A)
(1) Making a budget is very easy if you no the basic procedure and a few principles. (2) First, writing down all your income for one month. (3) Income, including your paycheck or other checks from Social Security and the government, means all the money you receive. (4) Next, figure out all your regular monthly expenses. (5) Rent and utilities are important regular expenses; you should also include expenses for food and medicine you take regularly.(6) You must not forget because they add up, the smaller monthly bills such as payments for credit cards, interest on loans, and insurance.
(B)
(7) You also should keep track of minor daily expenses because you probably spend more on them than you realize.(8) These includes purchases of such things as sodas, snacks, newspapers, magazines, and candy.(9) Add them up for a week and then multiply the weekly total by the number of weeks in the month to determine the total monthly cost.(10) Transportation costs, such as bus and subway fairs along with gasoline and tolls, should also be calculated as monthly expenses.
(C)
(11) Finally, it’s important to plan as much as possible for special expenses, such as visits to doctors and dentists and repairs to your home or car.(12) Gifts for such events as Christmas and birthdays are other kinds of expenses you can plan for certain months.(13) Other activities, such as celebrating a holiday or taking a vacation, often demand extra spending, too.(14) Some months may also require you according to the season to buy new clothes.(15) By preparing a budget in all these areas, you can figure out how much money you need for each month, this will help you watch your spending and may help you to save for the future.
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Sentence Income, including your paycheck or other checks from Social Security and the government, means all the money you receive.
The most effective revision of sentence 3 would begin with which group of words?

Income and money and paychecks and checks and the government
Income, your paychecks, Social Security, and the government,
Income means all the money you receive, including
Receiving money is meaningful
Receiving money, your paychecks

Answer(s): C

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QUESTION: 19

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Sentence Last week, a bill dated January 15, for the amount of $634.00, was received here from your office.

Which is the most effective revision of sentence 1?

Last week, a bill for $634.00, dated January 15 was received here from your office.
A bill was received here last week from your office dated January 15, for $634.00.
At our office last week, a bill for $634.00 was received, dated January 15.
Last week, we received a bill from your office dated January 15 for the amount of $634.00.
For the amount of $634.00, our office received a bill last week from you

Answer(s): D

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